work in progress

More enviroment art:

the two chosen art

sketches:

most feedback that i got was my value needs improvement . From my drawning teacher i got a little praise that my art have some simaliarity with his old mentor http://bumskee.cghub.com/. From eric, 3th year student i got the advise to tackle this problem with:  

Something to think about would be why you are using those particular colors. Also i think your doing the black and white approach and then doing a coat of color? If so there are two good ways to approach 1) render the b&w so far that it is a finished piece, and then use a light wash of color (emphasis on light) or 2) do a rough sketch with the values you want to use, add the color washes, and then with the color in place keep painting it till it's done. 

hope this makes kind of sense. An example of the first method would be Keikai Kotaki, and the second Jason Chan