Guardian of the hole remake in progress : dramatic scene

Last assignment for ADP (Action design Principles) : And it has been an constant progress :

when i started some few weeks ago its clearly my motivation and clarity that was lacking in my work. Never has been motivating than seeing the progress of work grow.

above here this was the original, but had little time done to it.

this was renewed version 1: I have discovered that my work need to have aleast 3 hours into to make it decent . The two belows i was trying different angles before realising it doesn't work.

when back to version 1 and flip it and trying to see were value need to put onto.

and now been coloring it